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Voted For: Personify
Personify
Nice Ish Homes, Your Better At Topical Then Battles, Alright First Of Nice Structure I Liked How You Seperated Each Verse
Nice Scheme, The Vocabulary Was Very Decent Some Good Ish In Here, The Whole Poem Was Decent Deep I Like How It Came Out Out Off All Three I Liked The Plane Crash, Had Some Deep Ish There, Structure And Vocabulary Was At It's Climax, Then Your First Opener Was Second Decent Coz It Was Deep Into The Topic....9.5/10
Forensic
Alright Pretty Decent Topic You Picked Coz It Was Also Deep In Your Verse But Your Vocabulary Was Basic, And Like Personify You Should Of Seperated Parts Your Opener Was Kind Of Basic As Well But I Like The Closer Nice Use Of Words...Strcture Could Use Work Some Parts Fell Off And Lines Was Stretched But Over All Pretty Decent Kid..8/10
So My Vote Goes To Personify Due To He Had A Deep Verse With Some Very Good Vocabulary..And Structure Was Set Up Well....
Vote=Personify
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