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Voted For: Hip Hop
Normal Punches-Hip Hop, you got this, but barely. Penis punch? Dawg you are better than that. Work on better material for your punches. Skriptz, you punches were weaker and that was why you lost this. I felt you stayed at the same level, but it wasn't as strong as Hip Hop's.
Personal Punches-Skriptz, got this. Not the best one, better out there. Everyone knows his old names, so not that hard hitting. HipHop, only had one personal, and rather weak. Using names is bad because some kids could consider the kid dope.
Metaphors-Hip Hop, not the best out there, but not bad either. Work on your material. Skriptz, not that many there, and the ones you used were rather weak in my opinion.
Multiple Rhymes-Skriptz, you had them. Ok multis, but felt forced to me, but that's just me. Hip Hop, no multis.
Structure-[b]Hip Hop, barely got this, but you didn't have all the ......... Skriptz, fell off horribly. I hate the .............. fillers.
[b]Flow-Hip Hop, ok flow. Fell off a little bit in the middle, but overall the punches helped it keep going. Skriptz, good until the end. Just fell off too much.
Word Play-Hip Hop, had it. Skriptz, no wordplay.
Hip Hop, not your best verse, that's for sure. Overall use more personals and throw some multis in as well. Put more wordplay in your verses too.
Skriptz, not a bad verse, but punches weren't as strong as Hip Hop. Work on your personals and your punches. Your pink shirt punch was weak because a lot of people said straight pics. Throw in some wordplay as well.
No Hate Just An Honest Voter.
v/Hip Hop
1 Vote, 1 Battle, 1 Win.
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