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..Rv Sucks..
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IP:
Voted For: Skriptz
Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes
Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes*
^^decent punch....coulda directed it to him more
Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses**
Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access
^^didnt have end rhyme....weak punch
Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis
Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious
^^good punch and personal
Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures
Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures***
^^lil self glorify but 2nd line brought it up some
aight you had a pretty decent verse.....your structure wasnt too great...some of your lines were stretched...........you had better vocab than skriptz.....but your punches weren't really too directed at skriptz......should work on that....you flow was good...saw some multi's...
Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat
It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back
^^decent punch
I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking
Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking
^^nice wordplay.....good punch
This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
............................................but it still means your wack*
^^good personal/punch
Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat…
......................got a 0 chance of having me beat
No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown...
.................................................w ith no heat
^^lil humor in this punch......good punch
you had a pretty solid drop........your punches were good......you had good personals........your vocab coulda been better........but you added wordplay and had some multis.......which made you flow better.......your lines weren't stretched.......and you had better structure....
v/skriptz
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