Voted For: MaRVJay1009
ryt good battle i just think that marv had a stronger verse on this.... imma break it down
i.g:
Yea i know u wan't me to begin with 1 of them phony start's
You a bliss rapper, i stick n cap ya like bullets stayin in young heart's
nice opener and good punch... 7/10
You battle cali exspect a win now i gotta battle u make it a repeat
You must be mistakeing, when its below 35 is the only time u see heat*
lol send line was good but i didnt like the first 6/10
I really smell defeat, cause kid u surely aint getting this one
I'm real deep and let u stand the 6 feet like u was the man big pun**
nice punch and good use of multies 7/10
Man u real cheap scared of this insane 1 comeing to spoil your lungs
Cause this coward Ape's face don't wanna meet the fist to ground like Donkey Kong***
lol decent closure and a decent punch...8/10
overall i thought you had a hard decent verse ill give you... 8/10 stay up...
marv...
look dogg..whut i need a book 4? dis BiTCH iS SCaRy...
i told em "step up ya vocab" he put his "foot on a dictionary"
haha this had me rollin on the floor nice punch 8/10
stupid!......u joined non-phixional dat aint PROVEN u a VET
dont try da say "basketball practice" is y u losin on da "net"
lol nice personal and decentpunch... 8.5/10
even when u was JERSEYZ CHAMP u still spit da same
i aint c no COMPLEX ILLNESS..be4 u switched ya name
another good personal... 8/10
ya wife's a rat,u dont like da facts dont even write dem raps
i bet u would be a "DJ" if could start ya life from "scratch"
lol dj/scratch nice wordplay there... 8/10
i see u a lazy prick,u know in ya heart dat dis cat jay-be-sick
ya girl a hoe she had more "sea-man" on her than a "navy ship"
lol nice wordplay decent closure and nice use of multies 7.5/10
overall i think you had a hard hitting verse with some decent personals and good flow.... ill give you 8.7/10
i liked both verses but i think imma give it to marv becuz he had better hard hitting punches and better flow... stay up and no hate... pz.
