Voted For: Personify

Well Time for me to vote Honest LOL or not At All LOL
j/k

Aii

Forensic
Opening
Undercarriage seem's to be shaking, heart pound's my chest..
Violent internal tremor's, force me to view instruction's of the life vest..
Fasten seatbelt sign glow's and grasp's my attention, captain vacant..
What the fuck has happened? is this the result of a terrorist assailant?..
^^^^^^^^Aii Great Opening I Loved That It had A nice Hook

Best Body lines
Moon not present, trying to avoid the collision of live's to nature..
One man losing his cool, he grab's his kid's, open's the airlock.."See ya later!"..
^^^^^^^^^You Have no Heart You dirty Bastard LOL ......That Made me Laugh Rii There So I Liekd It

Closing
I love you but im not gonna be around, somethin's happening" grappling my piece and my lead..
(Monica)"What?...are you saying you leaving me..?"..were the last word's i heard before the line went Dead..
^^^^^^^ You didnt Put Much effort Into your closing But i can See where you were tryna go ...
i give you a 8.5/10

PX
Opening[i/]
If a trees falls in a forest did it really collapse?
If no one sees that one dessert does it really exist?
If I enlist but no one sees, did I really sign my name?
If life is a game is anyone following the rules to play?
If a plane crashes in the night did it really hit the ground?
Or is it just your mind playing tricks with sounds?
^^^^^^ Hold On .........Im Speechless Perfect Opening
[i]Best Body Lines
The engine has now blown, why do they think of God now?
Since death lurks behind their breath God should care somehow?
^^^^^^^^^damn Im Bout to Cry *sniff*sniff* Perfect
Closing
My plan for this world is simple, something easy to understand,
To fight over sounds and pieces of this meaningless land.
My name is the devil, and I consume every single thought,
I take responsibility for every battle that has ever been fought
If darkness consumes the night then did you really sleep?
Or was the loss of life really just a logistic dream?
^^^^^ That Right there put The icing On The cake Its Like A trck race you never give your all until the end And damnit You won LOL

Aii yall I give my Vote To Perscription I mean Px LOL Please Please RTF in my Sig PLEASE!!