"good shit, that fux fux fux shit was funny as hell, and i take it he's got a picture of biggy in his sig, and if he does thats a stupid good personal and wordplay."

"decent personal, but it didn't hit all that hard... your just callin him a girls name, not that hot of a punch, but good wordplay."

"coulda worded this better sayin, that you up the battle( usin wordplay) idk if thats what you were tryin to say... since your in the battle your upin the skills in it or summin... but if thats what you were tryin to say u need to reword it.... also rhyming cattle with battle is never a good idea"

thats 600 characters of feedback...... and in all of his explanations, he got the ideas/concepts of me and CALIs verses totally wrong..... i mean, he didnt even know the relationship between CALI and Wendy's and he thought i had Biggie in my sig...... wen CALI first off was sayin I had Easy E in my sig (which isnt even true in the first place)...... and no Dex....... i was only suspicious of that thing CALI set up because u went and voted in his shit coincidentally, and in both cases u voted for HIM... and in one case.... the last up was an hour earlier, and in the other case.. the last up was an hour and 45 minutes earlier..... i was juss askin the mods to use their judgement.....

i didnt care much about the Dex thing........ but i cant believe ur lettin that last vote stay..... that vote was bad like woah....but its yall call.... i think u should maybe revisit it..... he only looked at 8 lines out of 20.... thats not even half the battle

When looking for unexplained votes, we pretty much just want to see that they gave reasons for the vote and for them to show that they read the verse. The rest of his feedback for cali would have been unexplained if he didn't mention the rhyming of cattle with battle, which showed that he read the verse.

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