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Old 01-28-05, 07:54 PM   #29
Parallel
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Voted For: Pyro

Mictorious:
hmm not bad the stucture was off my far but your punches are decent and some pretty good creativty in there but the reasons why im voteing against you is cuz you just didnt come hard enough J dot made it look like he wanted it more....you need to be more funnier in your rhymes n shit then you probably would of won....but alright peice...no hate

J Dot:
hmm pretty good i thouhgt you came harder and wanted it more you had some good punches and very good creativty damn i liked that alot and your stucture was decent and flowed pretty good....good peice from you....you got this one just by a string...

Opener: J Dot
Closer: Mic
vocab: no one
multis: Mic
stucture: J Dot
flow: J Dot
Punches: J dot
creativty: J dot

WIN/ J Dot
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