WOW ... the message in this poem was STRONG ... had me caught in a daze all the way through ... it was like you grabbed my attention ... i kept wanting to know what happend next and i love poetry like that ... i hope this story isnt true tho ! ... well like to someone you know ... cuz that would be hard to deal with ... and if it is im VERY sorry ... but anyway ... you know i could say do this or that next time ... but wit these types of poems you cant really change things this is str8 from the heart and its more of eh ... emotional poetry ... witch is REALLY kool ! ... Good poem ! ... keep it up ! ...

Peace !!

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