whoa this was one of your better Om's where you used some good creativty like your best....i loved this line..
the plane dip's the left wing, i slide forward in my seat
i hear the commander yell,"we wont admit defeat"
tight ass imagery also in your Om here....good vocab and the stucture was desent...the flow was very good....and i just felt this was a fun thing to read...keep it up man...

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