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IP:
ight mayne this is a good battle... nice use of multiew in both veres... imma break it down,
.mic.
i thopught your verse was cleverly put together but i think u tried too hard to fit the disses in the multies, i thought some of your lines didn't make sense which is what i thought brought down... apart from the bad things you had some decent punches and multies... overall i thought your lines were a bit too stretched but your verse was ight... 7/10
omb.
that was a nice clean verse... flowed well and your multies and punches killed him... there isnt much i could say about your verse really becuz there wasnt really anything wrong with it... the only thing i'd say was wrong is the flow was a bit choppy in the middle but you picked it back up again... nice verse. 8.5/10
good verses from both of you but omb got it on the flow and the punches.... not to say the multies as it's a multie battle, keep elevating or do what you do and no hate... pz.
v/ omb
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