i was definitly feelin this one.. it all flowed together pretty well..
Before I start just know that I ain't sayin this all for health,
Im so sick its gotten to the point im 'two-steps-beyond' myself,
^ i liked how this was started off.. good begining 8/10

Your bars ain't sick, so im sure that my ass is lastin a couple,
But I got you studderin... like "My 'ass-ass' is in trouble!"
^ it was a good diss on his name it flowed good 8/10

I seen a few of your past battles... too bad half was borin,
Plus you stretch your lines like my clothes if fat albert wore em',
^ehh this wasnt my favorite.. it was alittle forced.. 6.5/10

One-Step's dick in ya mouth so don't 'spit' if ya hopin to swallow,
My flow will leave you 'washed up' like a note in a bottle,
^I LOVED this one.. definitly my favorite line 9.5/10

Ya'll battlin my homeboys.. and I noticed you screamin help,
Im 'untanglin' this 'twisted' goverment then chokin them with themselves,
^another good diss 7.9/10


Yo JDot! Why you makin me battle this shit for brains,
The only things thats more 'ass' than his skill is his name,
^i laughed at this one, it was ok 7.5/10

And your right controverzy sells, so only way you sellin a tape,*
Is lettin the truth be known... and tell them your gay!
^LMFAO! good bar 9/10

I shouldn't need any more than this.. Even if my vocab.'s butt,
But that wouldn't be a problem considerin your whole rap sucks...
^GOT DAMN FAM.. u busted on ya self.. lol 7.5/10

u could up ur vocab. but u already noticed.. lol
over all 8.9/10