this was alright u just were really repetitive on cuttin up on his username.. i think u could do better



C'mon homeboi,You alright but im *OneStepBeyond* Dope
You a fag,So ya wouldnt mine catchin da nyne to ya throat
^this was alright i think u coulda entered better.. 6.5/10

FuckN with me and catch ya in THE ground BURY(Burried)
Teks rep ya dude,Like da nets gettin shot at by Larry
^this was forced.. didnt like it 5.5/10

Ill put ya ta sleep for all dat bullshit talking but no walking
So peeps see how its looks when*OneStep*sleep walking
^i liked this line.. it was alright 7.5/10

Ima merk ya,Watch yaself b4 ya take one to many steps
Fam,Lookin my way get ya face heated from da tek
^i think u talked about guns to much personally its played.. 5.5/10

You lame,Wack hmm..naw i think ya skills is way beyond
While ya bangin my songs,Im at ya house bangin ya momz
^lol this one was funny.. pretty good 7/10

Get ya heat straighted up before ya merk ya azz
Ill put more plotted dots in ya system than Geomotry Class
^guns again.. TOSS IT.. 5/10

Yeah got 1 win,How did ya manage that everyone ask?
Response from OSB:Well i battle viper he's a no show ass..
^best line i must say.. it was a good closing.. i liked how it flowed.. 9/10

over all.. i think u needa up ur vocab and stop talkin bout guns nd stop the repetiveness.. keep it up tho..

overall: 7/10









--->im not use to the new layout nd everything.. and i ment to vote for One Step.. but heres the feed for Assas-Sin.. sorry every one for the mix up