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Old 02-05-05, 06:02 PM   #13
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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This was a pretty good track..... although flow and lyric wise, it was all downhill after the first verse..... i think the first verse was the best and pretty dope, and than after that the second verse was good, but it had some lil meesups flow wise, and u rushed a few bars and mumbled alil bit at one or two lines..... and than the third verse i thought had allotta ruched lines, and the "three to tango" part juss sounded alil off and weird to me

pretty dope track tho....... the hook was pretty good, and i like that beat for the track and ur voice over that beat sounds pretty good..... this was a decent track, but juss look over ur last two verses to see if u should rerecord em and take a few words out on some of the bars.
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