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Old 02-06-05, 12:03 AM   #16
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Voted For: Artik Phrost

gotta give it to artik phrost on this one. I think his punches were decently solid. His lines were a little stretched and the structure was eh but overall i don't think the verse was that bad. hell's fire had some nice word play but phrost had better word play and fire just got crazy wit it talkin about alaskan pipeline's and such. pretty graphic and it throws the rest of the verse off once he starts talkin about white washed turds and shit. anyway just calm down on the imagery and upgrade the punches to match your word play and you could've took this.

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