View Single Post
Old 02-06-05, 07:36 AM   #9
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
IP:

Voted For: kelsick39

yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george
but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts*
wasnt feeling this...

i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you
i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u**
ok..

Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head
Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed***
decent..

a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless
its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages****

could of been a better ending, flow ok, no hard punches, no multis, but all around decent no played punches at-less just wasnt good hard hitting ones..


-----------------------------------------------------------



This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him
his blimp is broke*, like a bad show on Nickelodeon
decent...

Matter fact, hes missing his best friend
a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went**
ok..

Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick
at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick
no no and no....

I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick
i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kicks
ok..

We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click
Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick
WTF?? weak ending...

flow ok, no punches, no multis no personal no noting really just flowing and no direct hits that had effect just work on those and u will be better....

ya preety even thou but good battle....

RETURN THE FAVOR OF A HONEST VOTE...