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Voted For: BlackDeathDB
kelsick-
i was feeling the nameplay.. you had some creative lines, the opener was decent..
Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head
Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed***
a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless
its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages****
^^Nice bars, aight punches... you had nice flow in these lines. You didn't have many personals but overall your verse was decent.. stop explaining ya punches, it's understood.
BlackDeathDB-
Matter fact, hes missing his best friend
a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went**
nice personal... good job
i was feeling ya personals in your verse..
Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick
at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick
^^nice personal, play on his location wit his name
i wasn't feeling your closer.. but you had some personals good enuff to take this one, in my opinion..
good luck..
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