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Old 02-06-05, 09:23 PM   #17
.Ike.
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Voted For: kelsick39

yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george
but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts*
decent opener here.....6/10

i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you
i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u**
hit nicely.....7/10

Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head
Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed***
decent wordplay here...hit ok...7/10

a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless
its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages****
pretty good closer....7/10


overall................27/40


death..............
This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him
his blimp is broke*, like a bad show on Nickelodeon
ok wordplay....5/10

Matter fact, hes missing his best friend
a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went**
ehh wasnt feelin it.....4/10

Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick
at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick
not good here....3/10

I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick
i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kicks
ehh ok....5/10

We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click
Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick
nah not good....3/10


overall..........20/50



easy to choose....kelsick came with harder punches....more creativity....better wordplay....and structure.......RETURN THE FAVOR KEL.....link in sig....thanks
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