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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: Kesse
this was a close battle but kesse edged it ill tell you why...
kamikazee...
I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
^^ self gloryfication not good the second line had a lil punch
All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic
^^some creativity in the first line but the second line came weak
I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope,
Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope
^^ nice closure and a good punch...
overall i thought u came weak... i have seen better from you.. your first line was not good but u pulled it back kinda with your other punches... your flow was on point throught the whole verse and your structure was aight... 6/10
kesse...
'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide
^^ decent opener name plat and decent punch
with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
^^ another good personal decent job
your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse
but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse
^^ alryyt punch could'av been better
you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
^^ haha decent close i liked the sweet diabetic line lol
overall u had some decent punches in there and some good personals... your flow stayed srtong and your structure was alryyt ill have to give you this becuz of your harder hitting punches and personals...
please return the favour with an honest vote on any baqttle in my sig please explain your votes as they do get d/qued which is not good...
pz.
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