Voted For: ••••Dice••••

bit of a one sided battle here...

dice...

You poor-slob, I’ma make you eat-these-keys like a MF door-knob,
In need of a new job, looks like termites got to ya rappers log,
^^ good use of multies but a weak punch
Jay Kal seriously dude? WTF you try’n prove?
Now everyone’s eye’n me think’n “Who let the retard in the room?”
^^ lol funny punch good job
Shit’s safe to assume you weren’t ever meant to text!
Not on RV, not on even on key’s, NOT EVEN THE INTERNET!
^^ alrryt could'av seen some creativity in tht line
WTF you expect? To just throw a random battle out and win?
Jay Kal just try’n to be hard, like throw’n juice into tanquary gin.
^ decent punch there
I’m your flue shot, the vaccine for your so-called “sickness”
So next time ya think bout a call out, remember Dice is your fuk’n weakness
^^ decent closure and good punch

overall i thought your verse was solid you had some decent punches in there, your flow was good structure was aight your vocab was good and your wordplay was fair... 7/10

jay kal...

Yo Im rollin Dice, but I don't see 6 sides/
Only 2, and either one only has 4 periods/
I can only think fake like Matchbox rides/
Or fake like failed lyricists/
This is a keystyle, you took the style out of the key already/
You need keys to ignite your verse, but I brought the fire aheady/
You should dip like lays, with your weight in a bag/
Your bag bout to get stolen, like backalley casino riches to rags/
To win this here, you'd need help from up above/
Cause you gettin served like 40 to love/


i cant really break this verse down becuz your structure was a tad fucked... i saw rhymes in there but they wernt a,a,b,b they were like a,b,a,b, which made it hard to understand... your flow was decent your punches didnt really connect as much as dices did, your vocab was really that great.. you need to elevate a bit you got potential you just need teaching... i spose your verse was ight but nothin spectacular you lost this becuz of your punches and your structure... 4/10

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