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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: The Dex
hahahahaha good battle both of you... i really enjoyed this battle....
alien...
Dex ain't what you expect...his winning chance is slim
his skills are so ugly...even aliens takes pictures of him
^^ lol good opener and decent punch 7/10
despite all the times I hook him...dex still won't be star
I mean really...who still leave spaces between each bar?
^^ good punch, alryyt personal 6/10
the god made mistakes...now he wishes to start off new
the kid so wack...I even have to wait in line to hate you
^^ ooooo good punch i was laffin... 7.5/10
everyone wants you dead...I can't visit though, quit kid!
noone wants to come to europe...UK may become Madrid
^^ not feelin it... 5/10
& I wouldn't come to your funeral...I think it's full of shit
but I did send a telegraph...saying that I approved of it
^^ you fell off on this line... 5/10
& I think this is the turning point now...Alien is dominant
I'm not in a crew...at least I'm not in Twisted Government
^^ any crew is better than none... 4/10
damn newbs these days...they're just wacker than wack
Dex's 'X' marks the spot...and it's how RV 'kissed his ass'
^^ alryyt punch 6/10
dex is that wack...don't even mention twisted Government
of course I'd call them tw...Alien pretty much own the crew
^^ didnt rhyme and u use wack too many times 5/10
the Alien remains confident...and I'd even feel dex's pain
Dex been downhill...since he removed the 'W' in his name
^^ decent personal... 6.5/10
really Dex...you wack and I don't know if it was intended
how could you be dexterous? 70% of humans are all right handed!!!
^^ decent closure and decnt perosnal 6/10
overall i give you... 58/100 i thought your first few lines were decent but then you fell off on the second half of your verse... you had some decent punches and some funny personals, your vocab was aight and your structure was on point... you need to stay on the subject of battling then u will win more aight good verse... stay up!!!
dex....
His verses look like they were written on smack
Aint difficult winning this, he admits hes whack
^^ nice opener and decnt personal... 7.5/10
He couldn’t hit a "hot bar" in Las Vegas nightspots
Im burning the screen, your not even quite hot
nice punch and decent meta 7/10
coming at you with talents of mean proportions
I don’t just own you, this is complete extortion
^^nice punch again... 7/10
Alien in a UFO where he likes to soar
How can he fly wen he cant leave the floor?
^^ haha good personal very humurous... 8/10
Chasing fame but the only way you'll fold paper
Is in the toilet when your doubling up the layers
^^ and good punch... 7/10
We shall see if Alien brought the correct protection
Cos after this battle wont be an Alien Resurrection
^^ another nice personal.. 7/10
At times of hurricanes, Alien don’t run or duck
Cos thats the only time he gets a blow or a suck
^^ alryyt but i thought it was kinda played... 6/10
Should have run for cover and listened to your mother
Your brothers my son cos I fucked her without a rubber
^^ lol funny but played again.. 6/10
Cant be fussy with choosing his type of persuasion
Was told they were easy, so just looks for asians
hahaha... decent personal 8/10
Hes the opposite of a mailman with nothing to boast
Talks so much shit wants to delete his own posts
^ decent personal and good closure 8/10
overall i give you... 69.5/100, i thought your verse was really funny you had more personals and your flow was better... you used better vocab and your structure was good... the only lines i thought were played were the mother line and the one above it. good job though...
imma give this to dex becuz of his personals and better punches... hope that explaines it all pz.
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