Voted For: Blackmage
IE:
savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance...
like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance...
blah, amputee lines are played
flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still...
a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill...
setup was decet, punch doesn't connect
i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
Best bar in your verse
now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon...
plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong...
Setup was better than the punch, woulda been better if you switched 'em
my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined...
ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines...
Weak
just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson...
take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping...
Didn't really rhyme
it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it.....
cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...
Decet closer
blackmage:
I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness"
just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness
Decent personal, Ok opener overall
your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman
i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman"
Decent personal, wouldn't have worked without the explanation though
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"
Good punch, best bar in your verse
I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision
you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision
Another personal that wouldn't work without explaining it
you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity
your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity
setup was good, punch was weak
merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
vs.
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"
blackmage wins.
RTF @ the link in my sig, honest explained votes only