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Old 02-07-05, 08:34 PM   #3
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A look inside the life of a rich kid eh. I really don't sympathize but it was a good poem. People are so quick to judge anyone because of their outside appearance they never look any deeper and it's good you did. it puts you in his position and normally you'd feel sorry for him but my emotions died a long time a go so....i don't. The poem was good but i didn't like the ending. The emotion coming out was good but all of a sudden there's just this curve where you throw yourself into this poem when i was expecting the poem to end with some kind of resolution but it just kind of trailed off like the ending of freddy vs. jason. Anyway good poem still. keep it up
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