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Millionare kid, with a heavy sin to bare with
Left the house crying, running to his therapist
Yearning for the couch his heavy heart can lay on
To search for his childhood vandalized with crayons
He's got EVERYTHING, bitches in his bed moaning
Money buys hoes, but never love for the lonely
Money buys cars, but he's going no where really
Money lies to stars, so they cant see clearly
Faces of Benjamin Franklin, mean nothing to him
Not wen he's in a pot so hot you can make stew in
Honestly this kid is FUCKED UP, I noe you thinkin why
He's got EVERYTHING, but wakes up hoping to die

His father.....
directs porn, and LOVES money, a slave of its worth
His mother.....
a broken plastic like the condom that gave him birth
His friends....
Wallet heavy but empty inside with deep dispair
His teachers...
All love him, but without money, they wouldnt care

Harvard is a place to him, nothing big, its all good
And this kid's idea of hood, is Ebonix he understood
Things are goin well? Then why live in such torment
Its coz his plate's full, but his spoons are all bent
He grew up a racist, a known bigot of all nationalities
Puttin down other melanin with a justified rationality
He's got EVERYTHING, but he cries his pillow to sleep
And he counts demons lurking instead of counting sheep
If he's got EVERYTHING, then damn, i must be perfect
Coz im happier then him but im out here still workin

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A look inside the life of a rich kid eh. I really don't sympathize but it was a good poem. People are so quick to judge anyone because of their outside appearance they never look any deeper and it's good you did. it puts you in his position and normally you'd feel sorry for him but my emotions died a long time a go so....i don't. The poem was good but i didn't like the ending. The emotion coming out was good but all of a sudden there's just this curve where you throw yourself into this poem when i was expecting the poem to end with some kind of resolution but it just kind of trailed off like the ending of freddy vs. jason. Anyway good poem still. keep it up

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i would like 2 have had it like that.....lol but on the real i like the concept even tho i can't relate 2 it u took me on a visual journey of that life & u got potential keep it up
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