this was a good flow...your vocab was good...the topic was good...you flow was good all over, except it was kinda confusing in spots...you should add a second verse to that, it would make it what much better i think...but yeah...other than that it was a tight piece...keep them comming...~1~
return favor on peepin my open mic...
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