HOOK:
i freely express
til' people become impressed
and no matter how much i may feel dispossessed
i will always have fans that think i'm the best
and leave with one more request (2x)

VERSE 1:
my skills are collateral, my songs are bilateral
and my words are multilateral, that's factual
but no matter what they're contractual
i got a bunch of hyped up fanatics that spit 24/7 like mechanics
we all even got rhymes as tight as Illmatic's
except for Mathmatics who'll fuckin' get popped by automatics
my words are all democratics using systematics and telematics
and girls love me cuz of my charismatics
my vocab keeps my rap elastic and i try ta outlast it
while i melt hataz like thermoplastic and i'm not bein' sarcastic
ever since i was small the rap game made me enthusiastic
i'ma keep on going til' my rhymes are perfected and corrected
cuz i got nuthin else ta do when my mother leaves me neglected
and i defitnly can't live without my raps being rejected
so for every feedback i collected i feel affected
i'm just gonna face it the rap game's got me infected
and now it got me directed so after the hook i'm gonna extend it


HOOK:
i freely express
til' people become impressed
and no matter how much i may feel dispossessed
i will always have fans that think i'm the best
and leave with one more request (2x)

VERSE 2:
many people tell me they had perplexity with Complexity
and like the rest of the majority i have a problem with authority
they just try ta stop me from my priority and they still keep floorin' me
but it ain't my fault i'm homicidal, never suicidal
cuz to me rap is vital, that's why i use every title as a recital
i leave open mics on your computer as if i was an intruder
and i make decisions that'll fuck with another one's visions
but I drop shit like Linkin' Park's and Jay-z's Collisions
it's just so hott in the Rapverse community
that the people commonly feel impunity along my whackness immunity
and i'm rapping with any oppertunity so don't be losing me
cuz you know how my music be so sing after me

HOOK:
i freely express
til' people become impressed
and no matter how much i may feel dispossessed
i will always have fans that think i'm the best
and leave with one more request (2x)

this was a good flow...your vocab was good...the topic was good...you flow was good all over, except it was kinda confusing in spots...you should add a second verse to that, it would make it what much better i think...but yeah...other than that it was a tight piece...keep them comming...~1~
return favor on peepin my open mic...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...165#post1946165

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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"

HONOR and RESPECT

true i could see your point but believe it or not all of them are real words i'm not making any up which would be retarded..but i didn't expect much of ya to actually understand what the words are if u wanna take any extra time ta try ta figure them out you could go to www.google.com and type in "rhyming dictionary" and click on the 1st one and then just type her on in but i can't change it cuz the big words and multi's is what made this shine

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175713
"COMPLICATED FREESTYLE"

im feelin that shit
thats was tight
some confusment at parts
but overall it was tight
i like ur vocab and
ur lyrical content
i liked tha flow
ill give u 7.5/10
btw make a second verse itll become
much better
return tha favor

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cool i'll do that when i get the chance i'm already flowin' in with ideas and i love that ya'll lovin my shit there's never such a better feelin to know that so keep the feedback flowin'

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176153
"GO TO SLEEP REMIX" by excell featuring me

im high as a mother fucker so im just gonna say dope

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

c'mon get more feedback i know u feelin it just let me know bout it

c'mon people let's try to get this as full as the last one but with real feedback this time

hey dis was a good piece damn boi........good vocab, need more multies, good punches hmmmm overrall structure was tiight....it did throw me off a bit like toward da middle but yea overral ya did good........7.5/10 keep it up

that's cool, so lil u got any pics of u since ur a chick and all i want ta see how u look like

Sup man pretty decent verse, Nice flow, vocab & word play at times,...

This was nice keep it up man

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yo i came up with a buncha ideas for this song right here while i was being bored as fuck at school today...first off i'll make sure i'll make that 2nd verse for this song that ya'll mentioned to me, and another thing that i was thinking of is that since so many people did remixes to actual famous rappers i'd figure i'd do a Complicity Remix but i figure it'll actually sound better with other people in it as long as their not wack so for anybody who reads this and wants ta be in it let me no send me a short sample verse and if i think i like it i'll let u know