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Old 02-09-05, 04:38 PM   #21
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Voted For: 9th Degree

Ya rep is weak...Im draining fluids from ya Neck and Cheeks
Until ya blood runs dryer..than Periods in their Second Week
Period lines= gay/played, u made a unique twist, but still not that hard or good
U should go find a new habit..... like little kids with Cigarettes
Cause 9th Degree 'pulls his punches'..right off of the Internet
haha...... gotta laugh from me
Could be da Gay Animal Doctor......the way You a Homo Vet
But like Peaceful Camera Shy Terrorists You 'Pose No Threat'
ehhh.... weakish punch, the setup was actually a better line
U hated on me from da jump...dat I have no Ounce Of Doubt
With Soc Dic so far in ya mouth ...it knocked ya Tounsils Out
hah, kinda funny.......ok bar
So if U 'Driven'.... U get shitted on like Cars with Open Roofs
You'll feel this loss 24-7..... Your record will Show the Proof
BEST bar of ur verse..... funny ass personal.... this one almost won u the battle
Dis 2 much weight on ya back its bout to Snap Ya Spine in 3
If Knowledge is Power..I guess I just Mastered my 9th Degree
Ive seen lines like this before, and random people just mentionin it in threads... but still a decent closer

9th Degree:

Before KORV you were slept on, I still lay on the game
'Cuz you couldn't bring heat if I spotted you a play on my name
hahaha, funny opener, this was way better than hotshh's in my mind
Truthfully, you used to spit fire, now you'll get doused out
Step again, I'll put your shh in a box like an outhouse
haha.... nice wordplay and punch, decent bar
Now now, I don't mean to get harsh but you want it
Yeah, I admit my verse is garbage...you're the focus of it
hahaha, not very good vocab, but funny ass line
All the fans you got from the tourney are soon to be pissed
'Cuz they don't wanna see you sunned, like a lunar eclipse
sunned lines=played, but ur twist on it was better than shh's twist on a played punch
It took 3 battles to get you to check, fear's in ya bones with the marrow
Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros
ehhh, ive heard a similar line like this before.... get more creative
Sayin' you're the best whenever you bust, psh!
Shut the hell up dog, you're not hot, so just shh!
haha, funny line........ not that good of a closer, but good play on his name....

overall i think 9th took this with constant personals that were funny and hard hitting..... hot needed some more decent personals like his "24-7" one to take this battle.... altho 9ths vocab wasnt that good, the personals and humour of his verse got him the win in my book...

v/9th
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