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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: J DOT
good verse from both of you this was a good battle....
epical...
Your Crew Aint Worth Saving Coz Like Retards You Don't Finish What You Start
His Crew's Falling Apart So Quick His Co Leader Doesn't Have Time To Depart
^^ ok punch nice opener
J Dot Get's Emotional Coz TheWhackest Call's Him The Punchline Genious
Coz like Lay's Potato Chips, J Dot Could Never Get Nuff Of Tha Q's Penis
^^ haha good personal and good punch
Only Way He Spitting Straight Is If His Rap's Came In Perfect Stencils
His Writing Is Like, Amateurs Coz His Mentals Is Allergic To Pencils
^^ niceeeee i like this line
Knock Out Queens Couldn't Hold The Thrown If They Bribed All Of RV
Drama Queens Coz Like Malibu's Ken J Dot Left To Play With Barbie's
^^ not bad but i aint feelin it
Go Back To Arbies, So You Can Try And Ketchup On What I'm Teaching
His Punches Is like Arm Amputees, He Swinging But It's Not Reaching
^^ alryyt punch
His Imaginated Scheme Of Merking Me Is like Walt Disneys Pictures.....
This Kid's Flow Compared To Mine Is Like Flash Lights To Light Fixures.......
^^ decent closure
overall i thought you had a solid verse with some solid punches... i liked most of your lines but there was a few that didn't hit as hard as your others... your structure was good and your flow was on point all the way through your vocab was decent and you had a good solid verse well done...
j dot...
I'l burn ya house, circle tha block and watch it rot
And threaten to kill u if u ever tried to tell tha cops
^^ alryyt opener but played punch
I got this on lock...Fuck wit DOT, u come up short
This nigga wanted to 'kill beef', so he showed up with 'forks'
^^ haha decent and funny punch
Tryna feast with me...ya head'll meet ya feet
I run the 'center like O'Neal', cause i keeps 'Tha Heat'
^^ niceee wordplay and decent punch
Have some decency...to admit ya crew is weak
u, you leader, yo fans...and tha fags yall breed
^^ ooo nice personal
N.O.K. got this B...and yo team lack skillz
in this battle 'I Rack' (IRAQ) wins, to show how 'Anthrax Killz'
^^ dayumm your on fire thsi was hot
I mastered tha best, u gaspin for breath, im snappin yo neck
...Beg for mercy now, while im graspin tha tech
^^ good use of multies and decent punch
Im laughin to death...cause u just a 'Lazy Boy' kid
U 'Comfortable losing...it shows it in yo sig
^^ nice personal here
Twitzed Government...and now we kno u wack
Save the embarrassment of yo crew, and dont spit back
^^ alryyt closure but a bit of a weak punch...
overall i really liked your verse you had better punches and your structure was better... your flow was off point in some parts but you brought it back up... i thought you had a couple of played punches but the rest of your personals and punches made up for it... your vocab wasn't as good as epicals but you dont really need decent vocab to have a decent verse like you did...
im giveing this to j dot because his punches hit harder... personals were better.. the structure was better and i thought he had a better verse overall.... good battle though no hate pz.
v/ j dot
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