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Rastafari Walk Tall
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Originally Posted by Premanition
Piece From Topical League, Want Some Feedback, Thx
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Feelings flooding intellect, brain suddenly in direct
Thus collect the jigsaw pieces that my life dissect
Wrecked but yet a hope prevails in a certain distance
This one girls existence encourages a stern resistance
For instance an addiction, true story turned fiction
Anatomy plagued by drugs now involved in eviction
Friction of relationship, thoughts position station wit
Ovation sits as mind considers that her patience slips
Educational opportunity, a chance that confuses me
Key to a future, a commanding choice that abuses me
Materialistic life with power to challenge the above
Or struggle & strife, shared with a girl that you love
Result to a dice, fate before my pride asks for advice
Success comes at a price, importance of this sacrifice
A painful decision, tears of joy? an emotional collision
Vision an empty life of waste, heart caged in prison
As I stand with mail, crooked shoulders tells a tale
Mental exhaustion, looking frail, application to unveil
Hearts ratio, pace greater, deposit letter in waste paper
A sacrifice for success? yes, to see that face later
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damn...this has mad vocab used well in some multi flows up in the upper section of the drop, tight considering this is a topical..topic coverage was original and on point all the way through..a lot of metaphors up in this, causing me to like think while readin the story...i liked your approach and content on this shit man..overall -8.5/10..dope..RTF..
Peace
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