Dope piece rite here.....


flow was very gud on the whole part nice
structure was gud
story was very good, kept me reading throughout which is difficult cos i get bored...lol
felt some gud emotion
nice concept, once again gud story
metas were the only thing some were gud n others weren't but thats all


imma give this...8.5/10


very nice piece fyre


can you return the fav girl n leave feed on this new om of mine, thx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177082

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