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Old 02-16-05, 07:30 AM   #2
Acuity
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listenin..........
love the beat..its mad mellow and spooky n shit

too many soundbites...siren n scream fits...get rid of the machine gun fire n fast car
lyrics kickin in...lyrical content is nice..emotion coming through as your voice goes higher n lower..actually lyrically this pretty dope...hook is shit in ma opinion..ruins a past 45secs of dope shit..sounds a lil off beat and just dont fit to me...im feelin your sections but not the hook, get sum1 gd 2 do it an dthis'll b dope..

overall -8.5/10
no h8-jus honest opinios
Peace
-AC
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