Ok I Left Feed For Soc And For Doomsday

Ok I Had This Track Its A Story Basically I Did I Had A Crackhead Sing On It From My Block Lol Hes Perfect For The Track Anyways And I Added Some Soundeffects And Shit To The Beat Leave Feed And Ill Do The Same Pc

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listenin..........
love the beat..its mad mellow and spooky n shit

too many soundbites...siren n scream fits...get rid of the machine gun fire n fast car
lyrics kickin in...lyrical content is nice..emotion coming through as your voice goes higher n lower..actually lyrically this pretty dope...hook is shit in ma opinion..ruins a past 45secs of dope shit..sounds a lil off beat and just dont fit to me...im feelin your sections but not the hook, get sum1 gd 2 do it an dthis'll b dope..

overall -8.5/10
no h8-jus honest opinios
Peace
-AC

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tracks pretty coo you actually was on beat..lol jk..but yeah you flowed well..i just dont get why you brought a base head in yo crib to record..lol sounds a lil desprate dont you think you should of just hollad at some one else be..lol what did you give him to do that for ya one of those fake million dollar bills..lol well back to ya track lyrically its ill but ya styles alil ehh..it falls off here and there then gets back on...and ya fuckin qualitys iight could of been better if you dont record so close to ya mic be..stay at a distance and then send me ya acapellas cuz you dont mix well no offense..lol peace man 1ne...

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it wasn't bad bro... shit was mostly on flow, try raising the beat abit ... hmmm you could get some better quality but its cool... the verse was aight homie, thats all I gotta say...

the chorus wasn't bad ... it grabbed my attention... but still not bad

2nd verse wasn't bad etheir dawg...

overall this wasn't bad ... I could hear what u was saying, keep working on staying on beat, keep droppin

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chorus=wack, beat was aight, you need to work on your flow man, ask seven for some more help, lyrics were good.....overall 6/10

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^stay out my threads dumb ho flow was perfect on this chrous is wack lol i couldnt find noone to do it lol and seven never helped me do shit but adjust my cool edit settings stupid im better then seven hence the reason he sets battles up then ducks me

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your flow wasnt even close to being on beat. lyrics were decent, you need to fit them with the beat, your overlapping the beat and that's not hate, just construcitve criticism. overall decent needs work, but has potential to be dope with some help.

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ur quality took a huge step down....... and ur emotion was weird this time, almost too much....... the flow was aight, alil off, but thats how u flow, lyrics are nice, i hate that intro and that hook........ sorry just didnt feel it at all.... too much shit goin on the intro, take out some of it and make the stuff more on beat too..... but ur lyrics and flow was good.... juss work on the other shit to make it a decent track

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