it wasn't bad bro... shit was mostly on flow, try raising the beat abit ... hmmm you could get some better quality but its cool... the verse was aight homie, thats all I gotta say...

the chorus wasn't bad ... it grabbed my attention... but still not bad

2nd verse wasn't bad etheir dawg...

overall this wasn't bad ... I could hear what u was saying, keep working on staying on beat, keep droppin

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