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Old 02-17-05, 01:47 PM   #8
Vango
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your flow wasnt even close to being on beat. lyrics were decent, you need to fit them with the beat, your overlapping the beat and that's not hate, just construcitve criticism. overall decent needs work, but has potential to be dope with some help.
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