shit was aiiiiiiiight.. flow could be so much better.. chorus was wack as shit.. i can see where u were going with it.. but dude cant sing, so son it got fucked up..

iunn really like ya style forreal... but it was coo.. lyrics were all over the place.. it seems you really didnt keep a steady rhyme scheme at all.. you would have a one liner that didnt even have a rhyme to it and move on.. iunn like that shit.. its liek you got a spoken word track, but the words u speak dont mean shit =/.. i'd say revise ya rhyme scheme and you will be hot tho.. thats word