aight i listened to FAME...

aight wasn't feelin ya flow on this...feel off beat a lot...dont like how you came in...delivery needs work...didn't keep my attention...lyrics are ok...i think you try to fit to many words in ya flow i think you need to re write and reformulate ya barz...did you just go to audio if so i know mad text heads who have probs making the transtition from text to audio...they try to write and spit like they did when they were doing text...but really cant do it...try writing to the beat...peace


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