flow wasn't bad bro, im checking out hatred but damn homie, "D" had the right words... my homie went thrue the same problem... he use to write and then coming onto audio had trouble being on beat... his flow was nice but way off beat... peeps still liked it but he had alot of work to do,.... so he did, thats what you need to do is work on your shit bro, you won't change the way you write right away, but try to listen to the beat and the bars of the beat... and write to it... listen to the beat... and any profesionnal artist... and you will notice that they most of the time spit on the snare... and they still spit to the beat anyway... I think that you will need to maibe shorten your lines in written... or try anything homie

keep dropping flow ain't looking horrible wich is a good thing... build from that , and basicly work on the lyrical, then once you have it down on beat, the rest will come and you will need to work on other things...

hey nobody said recording and making music was easy bro,

keep ya head up


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