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Old 02-19-05, 06:51 PM   #9
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Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

i dunno wut to even say in this one...just elevate yall.
i gave my vote to US, because he came harder wit punches, and i think that wut everybody prolly guna say. yo structure...work on that fam, lines were stretched, and seemed unfinished. thats tha only thing that u did wrong in this. but i was feelin yo punches...thats it...oh, and some, some, some mettas..but, still kinda not too good...
YBuck. u had a not so good verse. work on structure too. and yo punches didnt land like they should have. they were nice, but yo wordplay fucked them all up. i think u should elevate a lot fam. u gave him an easy win...no hate tho...

overall- this was a onesided battle, but still elevate, and u will be at tha top of RV soon..work on ur structure first, thats everything in text...well, a huge part...

plz RTF on battle link...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177888
cause i took my time out to vote on this, and plz make it explained,cause i explained this....

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