I make mistakes I'm only human
I'm ready to start winning and give up losing
Cuz she finally understands who's heart she's been bruising.
^Love your ending...

Emotion was so raw and pure, am feeling what you're saying here and desire can be such a tricky thing. Like how the poem progressed, vocab was good and the structure was nice as well. Keep it up boy because I enjoy reading your poems, they're so real and easy to relate to.

DQ

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