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Old 02-21-05, 03:16 PM   #22
Lyrikal.Havok
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From: Sacramento
IP:

Voted For: New Meth0d

Breakdown...

Name:New Method

Verse:

his profile says, crew: council but I aint got to worry
cause this fags tough decisions result in a hung jury
raped, naw he getting t-bagged heres ya cup and saucer
what effect said in his sig, buck took him up on the offer
That should be a clue, whos gonna win this Sherlock
Whatson, I cud throw this match and have a betta drop
votes, 5-meth 0…. that’s BULL SHIT, fo real its bs man
dog I thinked I stepped on ya cuz the otha day, sorry fam
whats my name…. sounds like porno script 101
heard this guy spit and buck shot him in the tounge
I mean this tha dude that used to be dopeman
he’ll be cumin out of this battle with his head in his hands
my words break bones……….... fucka stone and a stick
eggs thrown at him on stage… yea he pickin up chicks
this dude aint butch, he on is knees and it aint for god
how wack is he? couldn’t even beat the MULTIE league mod


Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup bro...ill get back to you on the movie...anyways...overally keep dropping them you dont have to work on anything...opener was dope btw.

Stats:
Punches:8/10
Metaphors:8/10
Wordplay:7/10
Structure:10/10--first 10 here
Personals:8/10
Multies:7/10
Total:44/60
Percentage:73.3%

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Name:Buck.Shot

Verse:
Kid thinks Reppin the Council is somthin special
But it aint nothin New'ta'Me
Ya Method is ''Droppin the ball'' like hitler hittin Puberty!
You may get 2'or'3 Votes, shame it wont add too 5
I'ma call him 'Jack Custo' Cause he should ''Take a Dive''
Just give up the battle, its a Lost Cause
Lets see if you can take advantge of this Pause.....
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Now let the batte Commence, whats Your Defence?
The kid ''sits on the fence'' with his asshole Condenced!
Just from your Expense i got these people in Fits
He must think this Pro-Wrestling he's like ''I QUUUUIT!''
The rhymes are Writ, An ya Punches aint even a Close'Miss
Now its over with, lets ask these people Who's the Dopest?


Need/Don’t need to work on:Sup fam...um personally i think you just need to work on your delivery of your punches...they were nice but werent connecting...ya meen...its just one vote...in the end you could take it....good battle..throw in some multies btw.

Stats:
Punches:7/10
Metaphors:6/10
Wordplay:5/10
Structure:710
Personals:7/10
Multies:4/10
Total:35/60
Percentage:58.3%

overall good battle...
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