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CompleX has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:38 AM.

Me gettin stupid an slappin havok thatz how he get dumbstruck
This nigga wit a four leaf clover now datz da definition of dumbluck
he could lay on his back an jack-off but he still wouldn't cum up
hez fuck up even in cyber space
get more heat put in em den a fuckin fire place
so he should jus face that he'll neva gut a win
i bring my foot to his head and make his hole world spin
he bring his head 2 his foot an git his shit pushed in
nothing can cushin the blow from these lyrics
u might as well have bent over a said free kicks
your blood wil drip i'll leave u more den scarred
this fag popped a viagra so he could claim he was hard

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Lyrikal.Havok has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 03:25 PM.

What reason have I hinted that you'd have a chance?...
You could be a steady Noob, but ill still knock ya off stance...
Bring about your loss like it was just around the corner...
Your Childish lyrics should be played on bros. warner...
judge and object to any of your little prewritten projects...
get ya parents to sign you in coz ya names too CompleX...
this kids lost like he just had his own lyrics thrown in his eyes…
he reviewed what shit he wrote and recognized his own demise...
couldnt realize ya own future if you stood besides Mekhi Phifer...
that you have no opportunity in hip hop like a pro BMX biker...

blah...just battlin ya so you'd shut ya mouth at school....

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Voted For: Lyrikal.Havok

Not a good battle but Havok gets my vote, breakdown:
Complex, ya opener had me feelin u, then u feel off, ya otha lines were either played or forced, work on ya punches and ya structure because ya third line doesnt fit at all
Best Line-Opener
5/10
Now Havok, if ur tha Havok from when RV was RB reluanched, then this shoulda been one sided
Ya verse was ok too, u forced tha "bros. warner" or Warner Bros. but otha wise, its ok, that's it. Ok punches, was really hard hitten and be more direct wit ya personals
Best line-4th bar, ok but hit em harder
6/10

For the both of u, not a good battle but ya'll have room for elevation^^^^

no beef juss facts

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

uppin 4 1 vote pplz will return da fav............

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Voted For: Lyrikal.Havok

V/Lyrikal.Havok.....he came out wit creative punchs an good vocab wit sum personals...his structure was on point.....complex u had a good verse but u weren't that creative wit the punchs an vocab u need to elavate.....no hate....good battle to both....
punchs=LH
vocab=LH
structure=Tie
opener=LH
closer=LH
Multi's=(none really)
Overall=Lyrikal Havok
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Voted For: Lyrikal.Havok

lol niggaz go 2 da same school....u got dis 1 tho fam

opener-havok
structure-havok..com ya shit was terrible
punchlines-havok
creativity-havok
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-havok
finisher-havok
enjoyed-havok.........complex u didn't win 1 catagorie in dis battle...no hate

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS R IN MY SIG

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Lyrikal.Havok

LH took this hands down...his structure was tha main focus on this one...it was wayy better...and tha punches took it too..but w/e...this battle wasnt that hot, but i think he still took it....complex-ur verse was nice, u had some nice funny punches in there, but u kno nuthin bout structure, thats why i didnt give u tha vote....learn how to structure ur shit...and elevate...u had some ok mettas...but LH killed u in that, and wordplay....nuff said
overall-LH took it...LH-work on switchin ur style up..u always focus on ur punches, and thats good, but start throwin in some multies and mettas and shit...u kno i just started doin multies,...i always switch up my style, and then when u elevate...u can put all ur styles together and be unstoppable....complex..just work on ur structure for now...then elevate....

[B]and yall better RTF on one of my battles, or imma.,.........................not vote on yall shit NO MORE...i took my good gracious time to vote on this shit.,....