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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: Indeph
nice verse indepth... you kept it simple but it was very effective...
Let me explain,how you got your name to lead up...
Showstopper comes out.......and people leave the arena...
^^ nice opener and good name play 8/10
That's hurtful I know,but at least they awoke though..
I fit your name better,Cause I make niggas no show..
^^ nice punch 7/10
I feel bad for your coast though,it once had tight minds
but with you on the team,the west proves why it aint the right side
^^ nice goof flow and alryyt punch 7/10
want my thrown? I know that you aimed but you missed though..
Always comin up short...but with the name of the bigshow..*
^^ good punch lol 7.5/10
All peronals used,alot wrong with you,but you know its ture
so Your rankings so fuckin low,I can kneel and roll over you
^^ haha nice closure decent punch 7.5/10
i liked your verse alot... you had some decent punches in ther and a couple of gd personals well done... your flow went a lil but off point in a couple parts but it wasnt all that bad...
overall ill give you: 37/50
showstopper:
hmmmi didnt really like your verse that much... what iswith all the quotes.. your vocab was a little too simple for my liking you had a good personal in there and thats bout it...
You're a homo thug... on a man, you go down south
And jus like yo sig, you like the rods up near yo mouth
^^ spsoeit was ight not good punc though 5/10
IGA my ass, I'll fuck your girl, I got the power
Cuz when "April" rains, I jus "may" go and fuck her in the shower
^^ good.. couldav been worded better... 6/10
You're 14 yrs old, you're a stupid lil cunt
Why the "periods", "bitch", is it that time of the month?
^^ alryyt first line fell off 5.5/10
You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done"
Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns"
^^ good closure and dcent punch and wordplay 6.5/10
overall ill give you: 23/50...
i gave this to indepth becuz he had better punches better vocab wordplay and all in all a better verse...
no hate...
return the favout links are in the sig pz.
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