Voted For: intensify effect

Breakdown...

Name:Intensify Effect

Verse:
u act like u a,
savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance...
like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance...
flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still...
a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill...
i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon...
plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong...

*now lets finish him*

my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined...
ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines...
just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson...
take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping...
it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it.....
cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs......

Need/Don’t need to work on:WAsssup I.E, sorry bout all the beef, i mean if you wanna be straight we straight, but if you think there is any beef, then lemme know, but im done with the beef with you...anyways...nice drop keep droppin them fam.

Stats..
Punches:8/10
Metaphors:7/10
Wordplay:7/10
Structure:6/10
Personals:6/10
Multies:4/10
Total:38/60

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Breakdown:

Name:BLackMage

Verse:
I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness"
just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness
your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman
i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman"
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"
I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision
you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision
you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity
your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity

Need/Don’t need to work on:yo B...i think you got potential...i mean you coulda had him if your punches connected more ya meen...keep ya head up fam....pz

Stats:
Punches:4/10
Metaphors:3/10
Wordplay:4/10
Structure:6/10
Personals:3/10
Multies:4/10
Total:21/60


RTF in the Sig Against J DOT...i personally felt like i won and so did 4 other people....hopefully you feel the same way...pz

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