Okay, the structure was everywhere, you prezent your rhymes like they do in chat rooms

The flow was choppy, an it was punchless, step ya game up

I'm not hating

But do each bar
Seperately
Like
This

Aight man?

Anyway, keep elevating, theres potential there, you jjust gotta learn the ropes

Leave feedback on my open mic called Look Mom

Peace

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