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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: X-CELL
close battle imma break it down...
x-cell...
i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/
^^ good opener alryyt punch 6.5/10
its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose
abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/
^^ couldav been better 6/10
im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny
the only time u come hard is when u honrey
^^ kinda simple and played... 5.5/10
u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/
i feel possed like pacs right next to me
^^ not really feeling this one really... 5/10
pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/
this pussys beat down take a seat now/
^^ doesnt rhyme and weak closure... 4/10
ok your verse wasnt that great.... your punches were played i think you had one decent punch in it and that was it....your flow was really good though... your structure was ight... vocab was good... you just lacked the punches...
overall ill give you:27/50
pounds...
since he 1st registerd he put his album as his own team
no release date set 4 pen 2 pad must ran out of ink
^^ good opener didnt really rhyme though... 6/10
his onli decent bars camr from wen he drew a prison image
lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants
^^ is it a personal... explain your personals ppl wont know other wise... 6.5/10
and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist
used 2 human handjobs YEA!! wen a manican beats his dik
^^ played punch but it was aight... 5/10
had 2 watch discovery chanell just so he can get some heart
his line count down 2 his death so at da end of his verse his funeral starts..
^^ not feeling the closure at all... played concept... 5.5/10
i thought your verse had some creativity in it... if u came harder with your punches then you wouldav took this one easy... your flow was aight but some of yer lines were a bit stretched, structure was good but you need better concepts for your punches...
overall ill give you: 23/50
v/ x-cell.... he had better concepts to his punches... flowed better... better vocab... but you both need to elevate a little...
no hate...
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