Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

meh, okay battle here....

DTR
>got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket
-wasnt really feelin this one, coulda worded it better 4/10
>close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
-loved this line, best one..haha 7/10
>this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches
you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches"
-okay finiisher.....6/10

not too great, had nice flow, structure was there....just need better wordplay, punches a little played, up the vocab....
overall: 17/30

Ultimate Spy
>i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
-nice intro, coulda been worded better....6/10
>he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit
-this is your best line, i laughed.....7/10
i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it
-decent closer....6/10

meh, gotta work on structure a little more...flow was aight.....your punches were a little more thoughout than DTR, but still not that great....okay battle
overall: 19/30

v/Ultimate Spy

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