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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
IP:
id love to vote on this one but i dont got my post counts so heres some feed:
STYLE:
buck's drop was more dramatic and carried more creative wording
PUNCH:
if MjGrEeN maintained quality punches after the first 4 lines, u woulda had the edge man
FLOW:
good flow here by both, but again MjGrEeN u kiLLed urself in the end, the last 2 lines i feel were stretched, which couldve been avoided by throwin in some multis... Buck has a consistent flow
TECHNIQUE:
Mj, u could use some work on vocab, single syllabled wording thru out ur drop made it seem like last minute work, both should try and work on making ur 1-2 lines a whole, instead of throwing in any given line, and arbitrarily finding a word that just rhymes with the ending word from before
S: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
P: =tiE=
F: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
T: Buck.Shot > MjGrEeN
OVERALL: no hard punches, no major crowd pleasers, need improvement on working past the surface meaning of words
VOTE: i cant! but wouldve been Buck.Shot
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