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Old 02-25-05, 10:29 PM   #27
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Voted For: CeleriTy

CeleriTy
nobody'd know who ya were.. even if ya name was a disease
and u can IM for votes.. but your still not AIMING to please..
good opener, punch delivered
u can claim u spit fire.. but dawg you can trust you wont burn me..
nothing u could do would "serve me".. cuz i aint in the mood for slurpy's
pretty decent, punch was decent ehre
claiming you older than me.. dawg your just a ..fat liar
and its pretty sad.. when your own home can catch a flat tire..
nice closer, punch landed

Technical
Listen Celerity..Like Celebrities That Bite..U Losin Ur Dignity..
Look Geek..You'll Never "Beat" A "Pussy"..Like Men With 'Christian Virginity'..
good punch
In RV You're An Orphan..Who Relies On "The Councils" Dick Like Poor Kids*..
Ur Rhymes Are "Hot"? Well All (B)(l)(a)(z)(e)(r)(s) Dont Win..Just Line Portland..*
nah, this punch was weak here
Learn The Law Kid..Battling Me..Is Like Extortion..
Cuz U Make Decisions Without Visions..Like Mothers Than Go Along With Abortion
pretty decent closer, punch connected

Overall this was a good battle here, pretty close but
CeleriTy took this one though, had punches connecting
All thru the verse & the structure + flow was good here
And the vocab was decent here, Technical you had a good
Drop, except for that 1 punch that caused it there for you…

No hate…
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