Voted For: CeleriTy

Tech
you had some ight punches i really liked your opener bar but the rest was like whoa what is this it got all messed up like i didnt get it at all the multies n shit were tight ass but you make like these weird lines and mix it up and try and do punches that dont make sense try making less vocab in your lines cuz its like your forcing it to rhyme yo, fix that ish and it would be fire..

Cele
that ish was dope i liked the IM line and then the slupry line like whoa i couldnt think of that shit it might not be homouring but its a steaight up throw to the heart punchline yah know the rest was meh but i enjoyed reading that at first i was like iunno it was a hard choice but you were more creative stucture and flow was just alot better, pz

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