i say i would give dis a 6 out of a 10(6/10)...cuz ya whole drop was mad stretch hommie...ya coulda have work on dat before postin...ya flow was aight nuttin i havent seen or heard of before...elavate in dat subject and youll be betta at it...vocab was in a all right use coulda used more in it seeing how long ya shit was...wordplay was lackin alot in ya drop hommie be more creative witcha shit and youll do fine...

overall:Aight closer ta wack...6/10

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