Your the angel from god's tomes, sent to bless homes,
I'm here, but I'm alone, mesmerized by your eyes' chrome.
I silently roam, seeking to embrace your face in my hands;
but you have your own plans, and I can't meet your demands.
Just to smell your fragrance, I'd cross into the devil's lands,
because you're beauty is unexceeded by any other woman's,
is not the only reason I seek you either...nor the only am I to seek you , you have many fans.

You don't know it, but I stand tranfixed by the way
you are, and I only know I'll never have you; not tomorrow, not today.
I hang on every word you say, and compared to you, the most perfect things
are in disarray.
In my darkest days, I think up your face and everything is just okay.
And to this angel, everytime I go to sleep I do pray,
for you to never pack your bags, and go away and never return.
I stalk you ever time you make turns, as my lonely heart burns
with love for you, my angel who I wish to love me too,
the one whose face has guided me through, my worst moments when I grew,
and everyday is my debut, to see you, as my love mixes with your heart, contanstly imbued.

I drown when you're around, for in your loveliness I'm subdued,
My heart beats for you so much, my chest is tattooed with it's shape,
and if anyone ever said I never thought of you just for a moment it's untrue, it's fake.
With you I share a love only God could make, and we should forever be together for his sake.
I'd put my life on stake, and my heart aches, every moment I'm awake.
Having you not know me is our only mistake; my desires you did take.
But you're leaving me, which could never be, but I guarantee, someday I'll find you and make you my wife;
you're the only woman, who'd to I'd ever dedicate my life.

Uppin' like underpaid hookers in tubetops with herpes while dancing on a bed of coals...

i say i would give dis a 6 out of a 10(6/10)...cuz ya whole drop was mad stretch hommie...ya coulda have work on dat before postin...ya flow was aight nuttin i havent seen or heard of before...elavate in dat subject and youll be betta at it...vocab was in a all right use coulda used more in it seeing how long ya shit was...wordplay was lackin alot in ya drop hommie be more creative witcha shit and youll do fine...

overall:Aight closer ta wack...6/10

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